This is pretty good. I like it :)
Not bad for a first try. The melodies are nice. However, you definitely have to work on how to arrange all instruments together. Once the other instruments start playing, they don't fit together very well. It sounds a bit like a cacophony. Also, it would be nice if the melody was more varied. Especially in that first part. It should be changing at least a bit. Right now it sounds too repetitive. Seems like you have a good knack for catchy melodies, so you should capitalize on that and make them even better.
I hear you, especially with regard to the instruments clashing! Thanks for your review:)
This is pretty cool. I like the off-beat percussion. It's interesting that there are so many instruments playing in the background, and the vocals fit right on in this song. Overall a sweet tune :) I wish it was a big longer, though.
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